the cool breeze

Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Month May 13th: "the cool breeze" by Onitsura


the cool breeze
fills the empty vault of heaven
with the voice of the pine tree 


© Onitsura
And I (Chèvrefeuille) have tried to create the second stanza to make the scene complete, but I don't know if I have succeeded.
Sunrise on the Danube, 4-3-2016

the cool breeze
fills the empty vault of heaven
with the voice of the pine tree
              © Onitsura


a symphony of nature's music
skylarks join in praising the Lord 
     © Chèvrefeuille
   
 


Here is the petra domina attempt:

the cool breeze
fills the empty vault of heaven
with the voice of the pine tree  
© Onitsura

while the young doe gives birth to
a pair of spotted fawns .

©  Janice 'petra domina' Adcock

Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on 

CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI


Comments

  1. Close to nature and the wonderful wirkings of nature. Shows your heart through your description

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    1. nature is all one grand experience. i appreciate your words!

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  2. A tribute full of love ... Mother Nature needs us. Great springtime feeling.

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