Sunday, July 23, 2017

a traditional haiku

Carpe Diem Writing and Enjoying Haiku #3 classical haiku



summer heat surrounds
dragonfly seems not to mind
hopeful thunder claps 

©  petra domina

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12 comments:

  1. Very nice! Love how the dragonfly is carefree and the thunder is hopeful. A neat reversal of expectation.

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    1. I take no credit. It was an experience I had just this past Sunday morning. Nature is truly an inspiration.

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  2. Luv the contrast of delicate dragonfly against the thunder clap

    Much love...

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  3. Dragon-fly about the only one still active in the summer heat to provide some distractions!

    Hank

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    1. So true. Well, and the landscape folks.

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  4. Nice haiku Janice. A beautiful scene, and that theme dragonfly is just awesome.

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    1. Thanks, Kristjaan. Was not sure if I had the break in there.

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  5. Wonderful ! I love the scene , so aesthetically painted !

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  6. I like this Janice. Those dragonflies are facinating:)

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    1. Yes, they are. This one was blue. We have red ones every now and then.

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